Posted on Oct 1, 2011 in Sustainable Housing by 1 Comment

Question by Kitteh Smasher: Is this a great thesis statement?
“Sustainable style is a excellent, eco-friendly and price effective option to traditional housing”
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    mitster139 Oct 1 2011 - 3:11 am

    Try to avoid using “good”, and give it a bit more impact.

    “Sustainable design is an appealing, ecologically friendly, and cost effective approach to eliminating the long-term costs and risks of traditional housing.”


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